Customized, practical script notes to help you develop your screenplay

We’re in the company of many great writers when we feel:

My screenplay has plot inconsistencies, weak character development, a sagging structure, an absence of a captivating theme and tone, the list goes on…

In your Customized Script Development Notes, I aim to:

A) Identify what’s gone wrong and explain why;
B) Provide you with a constructive, easy-to-follow roadmap of suggestions to help solve your story problems;
C) Reduce your workload and anxiety while giving you practical inspiration and encouragement to get your script one step closer to being read and produced.

To get a better sense of how I work, who I am, and for more script talk in general, read my book on the process and perils of screenwriting:

Adventures in Screenwriting: How One Writer Navigates the Dire Straits

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What I offer

  • Screenwriting, co-writing and re-writes based on individual need (Please send an email to discuss)
  • Script writing coaching program to get your script off the ground
  • Development notes for the formats below:

– Feature length screenplays
– TV pilots / episodes
– Unfinished screenplays
– Short film screenplays
– Treatments
– One-page synopses

Development notes provide an extensive analysis and suggestions for development, and may include a logline and a one-page synopsis if requested.

What I do differently

I approach your project from every applicable angle and give you detailed development notes that you can easily put into action in your next draft.

I point out story issues with explanations that make sense and offer alternative ways to solve them.

I recognize what you want to do with your script and don’t have an agenda of my own.

I don’t limit the depth and breadth of my analysis to page numbers.

I am open to answering further questions so you don’t feel abandoned after you receive your feedback.

I care about the stories you want to tell, and I support you as a writer.

Sample development notes are available on request.

I strive to be your guide to fix story problems and get your screenplay reader ready

I am a screenwriter, film festival programmer and script consultant.

Happy announcements:

-My co-written feature-length script, ‘On the Water Surface’, is currently in post-production.

-My feature-length screenplay, ‘Home Sounds’, entered Stowe Story Labs in 2023, and is on its way into another draft and production possibilities.

-My TV Pilot, ‘Blue River’, has been picked up by Art & Essai in Montreal, Canada and entered Netflix-BANFF Media Festival and MIDPOINT‘s Pitch Programs.

A Berlinale Talents Screenwriters alumna and an ex-film critic, I participated in international film festivals as a film critic and served as a juror.

Currently, I’m thoroughly enjoying my position as director of programming at the Academy-qualifying Bend Film Festival in Oregon, USA–recently named “One of the Coolest Festivals in the World”.

I have recently published a personal book on the process and perils of screenwriting:
Adventures in Screenwriting: How One Writer Navigates the Dire Straits.

When not writing and programming, you can find me–semi-successfully–mothering my two lovely sons in Bend, OR.

Get in touch with me at

Selin Sevinç, 2023

Why are development notes important

Deep down you probably know exactly what is wrong with your work, but you just can’t figure a way out of the complicated machinery of storytelling without a skilled pair of eyes.

And you need to break through that lost feeling with fresh ideas and inspiration.

Why choose me

I offer you exactly what I, as a writer, would want from a script consultant:



A) identify issues in detail but don’t dwell on the problems,

B) give you a practical roadmap to address those issues creatively with several examples and potential pathways,

C) make you feel well-equipped, inspired, confident and eager to write the story you want to write.

If this is what you want, I might be the person for you. Check out what some of my clients have said about working with me below.

"Selin didn’t just give me notes, she transformed my half-baked treatment into a full-fledged story. She didn’t just point out the problems, she gave me completely developed solutions. I feel guilty not giving her writing credit."
Scott Nankivel

How it works

  • Fill out the form;
  • Attach your work in PDF format;
  • Read and agree to the Terms and Conditions;
  • Click ‘Submit’.

You will receive information on availability and payment, and we’ll go from there.

For questions, quotes and sample development notes email me at

How much

  • Screenwriting, co-writing and re-writes based on individual project
  • Script Writing Coaching Program based on individual project
  • Development notes for screenplays and treatments (plus synopsis and logline if requested), $550
  • Development notes for TV pilots / episodes $450
  • Development notes for short film screenplays $175
  • Development notes for one-page synopses $75

All amounts are to be paid in full and in US dollars. Payments are nonrefundable.

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